Well, congratulations on finishing. How was it?
Fantastic, utterly boring? Great!
Feedback, comments, questions, critique, and anything else is much welcomed and appreciated here in the comments section. Thanks =].
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AMAZING! Ajoya my buddy CONGRATULATIONS! Your sight is fabulous, I had no problem navigating it! I love the touches on the main page, the calendar, your awesome ‘Flickr Photos’ and your links! Great job girl!
I love the title of your story, very attractive and engaging characters, girl your pics are AWESOME! You did a marvelous job with the decoration, all the special effects, WOW! Girl, thank-you again for the invite, you have me hooked!
Hey there! I finally got around to reading the first chapter, and WOW! I am really drawn in. I love the foreboding feeling you’ve managed to create. I want more.
I love what you’ve done with Aurora. XD She’s very cute. You’ve made her into a real character.
The pictures are also really wonderful. They definitely pull the story along.
Hey girl that was brilliant but why so very short? I was hoping to read more but i am sure you have a logically good explanation for making it so darn short. Laughing i am guessing you do. Well either way it was still brilliant the pictures the characters were splendidly put together. Bravo Bravo i definitely enjoyed it and will be looking forward to reading more soon! I hope?
Ajoyaa! That was incredible! The pictures really pulled it together. I love your style of writing and all of your characters are beautiful.
As said above, you really have captured the sense of foreboding and I can’t wait for the next part :]
Great work!
Wonderful chapter! I really like where this is heading! Aya is beautiful, and the plot is very intriging. I can’t wait to read more!
Great job, Ajoya! Loving all the characters so far –and Aya has awesome hair. ^__^
Awesome job on the website too!
Hey girl! Great story I am proud of you, the pics were just awesome! I loveeeeeeeeeeeee your site you did a great job with it!
Hi Ajoya,
You have a beautiful and very functional site. I think blogs are the best ways to present stories. I can tell you put a lot of hard work into it.
Congratulations on your site, I’m happy you got one! This way you an decide everything for yourself! I will check it out, and add a link to my links page. You are always welcome to do a guest artist creation and then I can do one for you as well!
Omg I’m soooo late.
But need I say that this was an awesome read? I love the storyline, taking it back to the days of Pirots was a good add, love the suspense & even more I love Aya’s relationship with Daryl & Aurora. She expresses her self so well that you can feel the realness of her character. You are so right about me going to love it.
Now to the little details I caught that were priceless…
1. I love how you drew her matted hair in the morning (well at least I think it was drawn on )
2. Her french manicure was so damn perfect, I was looking for something like that; simple but, beautiful w/o being too long.
3. Oh & her thumb ring was so sexy. I love them.
4. Your deco was HAWT!
5. Picture clarity was an A+
Over all I give you an….A++!!!!
You really did your thang. Can’t wait to read part 2.
Great job & continue to keep me posted.
Yah! Well done hon I’m really proud of you!
The site is lovely, plus the music is great when you open up your page I can tell you’ve placed tons of efforts and it really shines!
I am laughing with your story, Aya’s expression are so cute yet so funny especially her eyes are staring in the opposite direction and she looks like she is pouting, how did you manage to synch that shot?, I love Aya’s hair it really suits her, plus her man is another thing to be said, cheeky and witty lol.
ROFL, David Jones?! We have a store over here by that exact name, that just cracks me up so bad, and as, you gotta love a bit of cheek
Oh no, no suspensful chapters, you are such a tease
See you around and I can’t wait till the next update, thanks so much for honouring me as your first reader and viewer of your site
Auroraspirit
Oh yay!!! I enjoyed reading it, Ajoya! You did a fantastic job with their poses and the scenes. Very awesome and the site is great. Yeah, hehe, I use blogs for websites too. I enjoyed it all. Can’t wait for more.
P.S. Sorry for the long wait. I’ve been really busy lately. _-_
Hey girl! I adore your site, it looks fabulous! I love the professional mag covers and the Cast page. Great work, must have taken forever. I finished the first chapter of the story, but can’t find a second chapter. Is it written yet or am I as tired as I think? lol Anyway, thought I’d stop by and give you the lowdown. Cya on TSR. :wub: Hugs, Stace
Ajoya, Sorry, so late with this comment. You know how G-momma’s lifestyle is right now. Your story draws you right in. I loved reading it. It is Awesome. It left me hungry for more. Didn’t know you had so much talent in this field. Looking forward to reading your future presentations. Thanks for invite.